Insanity

[sheepy]

Well this is a rather insane sounding poem, but not in a good way. There are a lot of grammatical errors, eg "friend morals" should be "friend's morals"? "grabbing we" should be "grabbing me", "its more delusions" should be "it's more delusions". The comma positioning is also odd. Are you a programmer and this is your habit to start the line with them?
These errors did make it harder to read, but by correcting these and some clever editing you could end up with an interesting poem on insanity that is also intentionally a little insane - in a good way.