Gratification

[Alex13]

Great piece of poetry, but i have question,
Is the physical love coming from the counterpart, or from the "I"-person? As, in my opinion, it looks a bit like your own love turns from physical to true love (from line 1 to the end of line 5) But that might just be something i misunderstood, don't know if it's just me ^^

You are correct It began as lust and pure infatuation, but eventually became love. Unhealthy love.

Is it confusing? Anything I can do to make it more clear?

Awesome, really like the whole meaning with it then!

But as billy said, changing the layout as he showed might try and help the poem show the change from physical to the real affection, and also maybe try to describe the change more clearly, maybe adding a line or two?

Thank you so much!