Gratification
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(02-21-2014, 09:07 AM)billy Wrote:  not sure the layout does you any favours. how we show the poem can have a large bearing as to how it's read.
i'd also try and use less of the smaller words.

an example of what i mean : (all your own words.)

The masochist in me is at war
with my soul I watch fire torch my spirit,
but you never let me burn

alone.

I can't obtain facts to prove my theory
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Thank you Smile I'll work on the layout, always something I've struggled with.
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Gratification - by Alex13 - 02-21-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Gratification - by billy - 02-21-2014, 09:07 AM
RE: Gratification - by Alex13 - 02-21-2014, 09:10 AM
RE: Gratification - by Erthona - 02-21-2014, 09:55 AM
RE: Gratification - by Alex13 - 02-21-2014, 01:39 PM
RE: Gratification - by Erthona - 02-22-2014, 04:12 AM
RE: Gratification - by Alex13 - 02-22-2014, 08:11 AM



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