02-21-2014, 09:07 AM
not sure the layout does you any favours. how we show the poem can have a large bearing as to how it's read.
i'd also try and use less of the smaller words.
an example of what i mean : (all your own words.)
The masochist in me is at war
with my soul I watch fire torch my spirit,
but you never let me burn
alone.
I can't obtain facts to prove my theory
...................
i'd also try and use less of the smaller words.
an example of what i mean : (all your own words.)
The masochist in me is at war
with my soul I watch fire torch my spirit,
but you never let me burn
alone.
I can't obtain facts to prove my theory
...................