02-21-2014, 09:06 AM
(02-21-2014, 09:02 AM)M.Z Wrote: Great piece of poetry, but i have question,You are correct
Is the physical love coming from the counterpart, or from the "I"-person? As, in my opinion, it looks a bit like your own love turns from physical to true love (from line 1 to the end of line 5) But that might just be something i misunderstood, don't know if it's just me ^^
It began as lust and pure infatuation, but eventually became love. Unhealthy love.Is it confusing? Anything I can do to make it more clear?