Evening Shower (for Tom)
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Sorry for messing with your breaks, but not really . Smile It's interesting what the changed breaks do to the poem in each shape. Thanks for letting us play with your words.
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Evening Shower (for Tom) - by Erthona - 02-20-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ellajam - 02-20-2014, 12:54 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ChristopherSea - 02-20-2014, 01:07 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by tectak - 02-20-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ellajam - 02-20-2014, 08:15 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by Erthona - 02-20-2014, 08:50 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ChristopherSea - 02-20-2014, 07:54 PM



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