02-20-2014, 07:09 AM
This poem might work better if you get rid of the rhymes. I didn't read all of it, but what I did read was sounding too foolish because of all the end rhyming.
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Sparrow's Flight
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RE: Sparrow's Flight - by rowens - 02-20-2014, 07:09 AM
RE: Sparrow's Flight - by Androcles - 02-20-2014, 04:55 PM
RE: Sparrow's Flight - by tectak - 02-20-2014, 07:30 PM
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