Evening Shower (for Tom)
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(02-20-2014, 12:15 AM)Erthona Wrote:  
Rain streaks across the page,
melting my metaphors
with the mercurial
abandon of a
precocious
child:
no great loss
as my phrases
were as empty
as the glass that held
my last portion of Scotch.
I lay my head upon the table,
and fall asleep to the sotto voce
cascade of congenial inconsonance
in this unexpected evening shower.

–Erthona
Thank you Dale. I would love this anywhere. I am in Oban. I am with a glass empty of all but vapour. There is rain. There is congenial inconsonance. There is apple wood smoke in the air. How can a glass so empty smell so full.
Back on Sunday.
Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
Evening Shower (for Tom) - by Erthona - 02-20-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ellajam - 02-20-2014, 12:54 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ChristopherSea - 02-20-2014, 01:07 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by tectak - 02-20-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ellajam - 02-20-2014, 08:15 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by Erthona - 02-20-2014, 08:50 AM
RE: Evening Shower (for Tom) - by ChristopherSea - 02-20-2014, 07:54 PM



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