02-15-2014, 04:35 AM
It's been years since I've read any of that sort of stuff. The first stanza pulls a little more into focus now. It's kind of hard to take those few degrees of turn then step into that reality, it takes a lot of mental energy (rhyme unintentional). You almost have to enter a schizophrenic state of conscious to be able to comment on this meaningfully. I'm not there today.I will say it has the right sort of tone, a mild sort of arrogance and condescension that makes the speakers voice seem genuine. Beyond that I can not go.
dale
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.