02-14-2014, 09:45 PM
(02-14-2014, 07:29 AM)tomoffing Wrote: This is brilliant.Thank you Tom for taking the time to read this poem and sharing your reactions, especially listing your favorite lines! This critique was a nice treat after shoveling about one foot of snow out of the driveway yesterday. All the best in life and poetry./Chris
Top 3 lines;
3. air-brushed in hemoglobin,
2. The gestalt exhibition
1. a botched Titan's accordion
that is all.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris