02-14-2014, 08:56 AM
Actually Chris, stick with "Gapers", to change the title would give the impression that your "carrion scavenger" is a crow, but you define him as four footed later. Of course that could be read as just changing into an animal, but introducing the idea of a crow sets the poem off incorrectly. Sorry, bad suggestion.
dale
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.