Gawkers

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Chris2fur

It is rare that I don't find something I would correct on the first read, but that is true here...as regards the poem itself. I would change the title to "Gawkers" (purely stylistic, but the sound of "gawkers" reminds me of crows). Loved the Tom Robbins allusion. Really a very good write.

Dale

I agree. I had nothing to correct and I sincerely enjoyed the poem. We as humans can't help but rubberneck. We piss and cry about what we see, but we're still curious about how it'll end.