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United Within
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02-14-2014, 08:09 AM
Here's an example of an inspired poem that doesn't carry. It's like you're screaming pretension. I say keep the topic of social injustice, but write something more personal. Something striking to you. This poem is overgeneralized and comes off bleak.
Can't wait to see what you come up with, Sandra
I'll be there in a minute.
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RE: United Within - by newsclippings - 02-14-2014, 08:09 AM
RE: United Within - by Love - 02-15-2014, 10:18 AM
RE: United Within - by ellajam - 02-15-2014, 09:10 PM
RE: United Within - by Love - 02-16-2014, 05:18 AM
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RE: United Within - by ChristopherSea - 02-17-2014, 12:03 AM
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