Valentine Macabre
#8
Ed's your boyfriend silly (I was going for endjamit). The comma is incorrectly placed. It should read:

i lay entomb, Ed
in wizened sack

Does that help clarify, or at least rectumfy it?

Beasties,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Valentine Macabre - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by just mercedes - 02-13-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by Leanne - 02-13-2014, 10:42 AM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 10:45 AM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by ellajam - 02-13-2014, 11:13 AM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by billy - 02-13-2014, 02:08 PM
RE: Valentine Macabre - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 09:42 PM



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