02-13-2014, 09:10 PM
Thanks for your input all,
My intended metaphor was clearly poorly constructed and conveyed. (Although I like the internet alternative).
I've reworked this to try and capture that better.
Let me know what you think
Thanks again
t
My intended metaphor was clearly poorly constructed and conveyed. (Although I like the internet alternative).
I've reworked this to try and capture that better.
Let me know what you think
Thanks again
t

