02-13-2014, 02:56 PM
First off, I just want to say thank you for taking the time to read and critique my poem. I VERY much appreciate it honestly. You have really great advice!
Another member on here kind of inspired me to write this poem.
United Within
Continents divided by limitless sea
Cultures isolated for hundreds of years
Thousands of unique languages
Millions of different lifestyles
Yet there is one thing that we all share
we are all together
venture to the edge of the world
a smile is always the same
there is only one kind of people
all of which should be treated equally
and one of them is you
Another member on here kind of inspired me to write this poem.
United Within
Continents divided by limitless sea
Cultures isolated for hundreds of years
Thousands of unique languages
Millions of different lifestyles
Yet there is one thing that we all share
we are all together
venture to the edge of the world
a smile is always the same
there is only one kind of people
all of which should be treated equally
and one of them is you