02-13-2014, 11:13 AM
Love this one.
Maybe because I'm old it doesn't even feel dark to me, more matter-of-fact and love-filled.
I especially like "against our will", "death attacks" and the end, dragging your beloved into death with you, why not?
Maybe because I'm old it doesn't even feel dark to me, more matter-of-fact and love-filled.
I especially like "against our will", "death attacks" and the end, dragging your beloved into death with you, why not?
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