02-13-2014, 10:33 AM
Chris2fur
It is rare that I don't find something I would correct on the first read, but that is true here...as regards the poem itself. I would change the title to "Gawkers" (purely stylistic, but the sound of "gawkers" reminds me of crows). Loved the Tom Robbins allusion. Really a very good write.
Dale
It is rare that I don't find something I would correct on the first read, but that is true here...as regards the poem itself. I would change the title to "Gawkers" (purely stylistic, but the sound of "gawkers" reminds me of crows). Loved the Tom Robbins allusion. Really a very good write.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.