Some thoughts spilled.
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I grin each time I read this. I like the contest of who had it worse, it screams youth ( or immaturity if they're old enough to be counting their blessings Smile ).

I like the stomach, it moves the piece into intimacy.

And the big dick thing is funny (they never out grow that one. Smile ).

Thanks for posting it, it's a relief.
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Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-11-2014, 02:30 PM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 09:34 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-13-2014, 11:55 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by ellajam - 02-13-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by just mercedes - 02-13-2014, 10:08 AM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by newsclippings - 02-16-2014, 04:11 PM
RE: Some thoughts spilled. - by billy - 02-27-2014, 11:40 AM



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