A Senryu on zen
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(07-18-2012, 04:43 PM)billy Wrote:  A cliff sheds its skin
across the mountain road
oblivious to traffic
This is real cool billy! You could have that cliff shed it's 'clothing' upon the road and add some double entendre.

A cliff sheds her dress
upon the mountain road
oblivious to traffic

It gets you a landslide and a stiptease in one!

-or-

Cliff sheds his overalls...

Smile Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Messages In This Thread
A Senryu on zen - by billy - 07-18-2012, 04:43 PM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by Todd - 07-19-2012, 12:41 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by Aish - 07-19-2012, 02:10 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by billy - 08-21-2012, 11:57 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by cidermaid - 11-13-2012, 05:40 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by billy - 11-16-2012, 01:04 PM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by ChristopherSea - 02-13-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by heslopian - 03-13-2014, 09:46 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2014, 01:59 PM



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