02-12-2014, 04:08 PM
(02-12-2014, 01:17 PM)Sheep Wrote: Wonderful waltz-y rhythm. I liked how you managed to not make "I met the reason of my heart" as repetitive as it could have so easily been by making them into a bridge between two lines instead of an anchor purely for structure.ahhhh thanks for the warm comment! The trick to a good triolet is making sure it's got a good flow in it, and not making each new sentence just another sentence. You almost want to make each two lines one sentence so to speak. That's what I tried to do here.