Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night)

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Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night)

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02-12-2014, 08:44 AM

Unsatisfied but in a rut with this edit, I thought maybe posting it would elicit some helpful advice. =] Thanks in advance!!

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Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-08-2014, 01:14 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:38pm (rewrite of Just for a night) - by cidermaid - 02-08-2014, 07:44 PM

RE: Missed call -- 4:38pm (rewrite of Just for a night) - by 71degrees - 02-09-2014, 01:02 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:38pm (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-09-2014, 09:05 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-12-2014, 08:44 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by Erthona - 02-12-2014, 12:40 PM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-13-2014, 08:11 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by cidermaid - 02-13-2014, 05:20 PM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-13-2014, 08:49 PM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by trueenigma - 02-14-2014, 12:32 PM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by Erthona - 02-16-2014, 03:40 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by trueenigma - 02-16-2014, 04:13 AM

RE: Missed call -- 4:13pm edit 1 (rewrite of Just for a night) - by justcloudy - 02-16-2014, 04:30 AM

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