Bullets of the Mind

[Mikeodial]

I must agree this appears to lack inspiration, and seems more a philosophical musing, and as has been pointed out, a not very original one. Although lined out like a poem, it seems to lack any kind of rhythm or cadence, and moves rather stiffly.

Instead of "unlike Hollywood", I think this would come off better if you said "unlike in the movies".

The primary problem I have is that without the title, this just becomes a description of war, not a metaphor for something, and that something I have no real clue about.

"In this decision making hell" What decision making hell are you talking about???

Dale

Thank you for all the comments. Will rework accordingly.

PS I am a Brit. ;-)