Waiting for the tide

[Keith]

To blow on wood when you carve, but he was sanding if he was using "emery cloth". I liked it the first way better, with some minor changes:

"I caress the natural curves
blowing gently with the grain,
and dream of summer sails."

"billowing thoughts" seems almost cliche to me, or maybe it's because it would be the sort of thing one would read on those vanity web sites. I has a nice sound, I suppose, but it doesn't really say anything.

Dale

Thanks Dale I agree it is a bit cliche I will have a think. Best Keith

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'Repairs' sounds a bit dull and flat for this lovely piece! What about something like 'Refurbished' or 'Rehabilitation'? This brought back memories of a spring when I helped a girlfriend repair her Hobie Cat, a very fast catamaran with fiberglass hull. Talk about dust!!!

I hate working with fiberglass, its too messy. I will change the title as I agree with your comment. best Keith

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Blowing wood sounds dirty, you dirty minded people.

Oh wait, thats just me.

Chris....that fiberglass dust is the worst! I used to work on a line for tvs and put eyelets into the circuit boards. Probably one thing that destroyed my lungs.

but you are right....'repairs' sounds almost as flat as the world before it was discovered.

I have to say Bena it did cross my mind, but I thought na no one will mention it

I agree about the title so will do something else.Best Keith