02-09-2014, 11:36 AM
Hello Leanne,
I have to admit that I had to read through your work a few times to be able to look up words that I did not fully understand. But once I did, it unearthed an image of our protagonist. What made you get rid of the knife? No evidence? My favorite part is the irony in the last line, after all it's a breath that keeps us together. Thanks for sharing the post!!
PAX
I have to admit that I had to read through your work a few times to be able to look up words that I did not fully understand. But once I did, it unearthed an image of our protagonist. What made you get rid of the knife? No evidence? My favorite part is the irony in the last line, after all it's a breath that keeps us together. Thanks for sharing the post!!
PAX