02-09-2014, 11:05 AM
Hello theinspirationvixen,
I read through your piece a few times already, because it reminded me so much of one of past relationships I did not get any closure over. Somehow you gave me a bit of that when you were describing false hopes, she smiled when I should have bit my tongue but I kept telling her things would be ok. It wasn't at all.
Your piece reads well, although I had trouble initially grasping the flow, it enticed me to continue reading. I am glad I did and am glad you shared your post. Thanks for that!!
PAX
I read through your piece a few times already, because it reminded me so much of one of past relationships I did not get any closure over. Somehow you gave me a bit of that when you were describing false hopes, she smiled when I should have bit my tongue but I kept telling her things would be ok. It wasn't at all.
Your piece reads well, although I had trouble initially grasping the flow, it enticed me to continue reading. I am glad I did and am glad you shared your post. Thanks for that!!
PAX