02-09-2014, 12:58 AM
Ha, another great expectation.
Although I like the internal rhyme of "zeppelined bovine" the word "zeppelined" caused me problems until I realized you meant it as "like a zeppelin". I initially got that mixed up with the purple rope and thought you were talking about a purple Zip-line, then further compounded by the "extreme sports" reference. Although, altogether it is a nice image, I think it will cause others problems (I can't be the only slow one out of the bunch). Is "Lancelot Brown" really that well known in Britain? Maybe a footnote for your poor American brethren.
Oh well, I'm certainly not one who has the right to complain about obscure references and allusions
Dale
Although I like the internal rhyme of "zeppelined bovine" the word "zeppelined" caused me problems until I realized you meant it as "like a zeppelin". I initially got that mixed up with the purple rope and thought you were talking about a purple Zip-line, then further compounded by the "extreme sports" reference. Although, altogether it is a nice image, I think it will cause others problems (I can't be the only slow one out of the bunch). Is "Lancelot Brown" really that well known in Britain? Maybe a footnote for your poor American brethren.
Oh well, I'm certainly not one who has the right to complain about obscure references and allusions
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.