02-08-2014, 11:21 AM
hey thanks I am a horrible at grammer lol. I do see what your trying to say. This piece is a idea I have that I want to use for a segment of some spoken word. The ninja moment being comical is actually intentional. I am just trying out different things that work or don't for stanzas. The Ninja or word ninja in this poem is suppose to represent another "N word." I being black don't like the N word so I use the tearm Ninja like "what up ninja." knowing this what you think