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Lying in my room
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02-07-2014, 07:36 PM
What I like most about this poem is the double entendre of 'Lying' (prone position versus untruths) in my room and the 'plot twist' of the room supposedly reflecting yourself while you ponder whether or not you even know yourself! If intended, excellent use of irony. I would play that up even further in your next edit. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Lying in my room - by Humbert - 02-07-2014, 09:45 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by Arachnid_Poet - 02-07-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by Humbert - 02-07-2014, 02:39 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by billy - 02-07-2014, 05:03 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by billy - 02-07-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by makeshift - 02-07-2014, 03:33 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by Erthona - 02-07-2014, 06:28 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by ellajam - 02-07-2014, 06:37 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by ChristopherSea - 02-07-2014, 07:36 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by Humbert - 02-08-2014, 12:54 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by rowens - 02-08-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by Leanne - 02-12-2014, 05:29 AM
RE: Lying in my room - by Humbert - 02-25-2014, 04:01 PM
RE: Lying in my room - by Camels - 02-25-2014, 06:50 PM
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