Insanity

[ralex003]

Insanity now- a -days have become 1 with humanity [What does this mean? I think I know what you're saying, but can you word it differently?]
,and our friend morals well he has lost his very gravity [[b][b]This makes no sense to me. Read it out loud. If it doesn't seem to make sense when you read it out loud, then it won't make sense to your readers[/b][/b].]
But Insanity is steadily grabbing we [Grammatically, this makes no sense. You do not say "grabbing we." Say "grabbing us." Don't force a rhyme if it doesn't make sense]
, [b][b]but we still nourish the deep pains
[b]Often thinking we have ………. Well that we have gained our true friend sanity,but in fact its more delusions never sanity
,from our very own friend insanity[/b][/b] [[/b]Starting from "Often" to the end of the poem, make this more concise. It doesn't flow very well]

Grammar tip: "Have" should be "has" in line 1.
No commas at the beginning of the sentences.