An Epic of Regret

[Arachnid_Poet]

Wow! All I can is EPIC!!! I like medieval history and ancient history, so I enjoyed reading this. It made me think of wars long past and you can never go wrong with poetry on war. It's very deep for someone who's new to poetry, so you might have the gift. Keep writing my poet! I liked the rhyme pattern in this one. You should definitely write a sequel. I'm not an editor, but as far as the punctuation goes in this piece, I think it's all good.