02-06-2014, 01:17 PM
To blow on wood when you carve, but he was sanding if he was using "emery cloth". I liked it the first way better, with some minor changes:
"I caress the natural curves
blowing gently with the grain,
and dream of summer sails."
"billowing thoughts" seems almost cliche to me, or maybe it's because it would be the sort of thing one would read on those vanity web sites. I has a nice sound, I suppose, but it doesn't really say anything.
Dale
"I caress the natural curves
blowing gently with the grain,
and dream of summer sails."
"billowing thoughts" seems almost cliche to me, or maybe it's because it would be the sort of thing one would read on those vanity web sites. I has a nice sound, I suppose, but it doesn't really say anything.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

