02-05-2014, 10:29 AM
On line 16, you may want to consider deleting the "Yeah" I think it takes away from the beauty of your poem.
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A world full of people - by StevenA - 02-05-2014, 08:31 AM
RE: A world full of people - by KnightPoems - 02-05-2014, 10:29 AM
RE: A world full of people - by StevenA - 02-13-2014, 12:12 PM
RE: A world full of people - by Love - 02-13-2014, 01:50 PM
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