02-05-2014, 07:43 AM
Thank you for your honest and thoughtful feedback, tectak
I especially like your edit of the "someone of note" metaphor. The Battenburg metaphor was supposed to recall tea with grandmother, that kind of cake being a stereotypically granny food, but I see what you mean, especially in regards to the parenthetic presentation.
I especially like your edit of the "someone of note" metaphor. The Battenburg metaphor was supposed to recall tea with grandmother, that kind of cake being a stereotypically granny food, but I see what you mean, especially in regards to the parenthetic presentation.
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