02-05-2014, 04:33 AM
For me "blackened clarinets" is somewhat problematic. Even when clarinets were still made of wood, they were stained, not blackened. As this is suppose to relate to war why not call it what it is, "charred clarinets"?
I agree with Chris about using before, because even when the orchestra is set in a half oval, with the conductor at the theoretical center he is still in front of (before) everyone.
I also think this would work better in a larger format.
Dale
I agree with Chris about using before, because even when the orchestra is set in a half oval, with the conductor at the theoretical center he is still in front of (before) everyone.
I also think this would work better in a larger format.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.