Stripping Puppet (song)

[Keith]

Hey Keith, I love this wild girlfriend of yours! She would be my downfall of course. Nice way to repurpose the title and some of themes from an earlier post. I dig your voice, but you need to turn up your mike and lower the guitar amp a bit. The only bump that I noticed was in stanza 3. The 'Taking turns' line was lagging behind the music and the 'grace' line had to be stretched a bit. However, it may have been just a timing issue. Cool man!/Chris

Hi Chris
Please don't think I'm taking myself too seriously with this I love music but a musician I am not, although it is good to have fun with things, and using the poem gives it a bit more life. I will have another go at the lyric but it is hard to keep time. Best Keith

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Wow Keith what an incredibly interesting reworking of the original poem!

My immediate feeling is that I like this one slightly better, because the story is more straightforward. The music wasn't particularly inspiring in its repetitiveness. But I'm sure that's not the final record. ;p

Anyway I'm not sure I have much constructive to say, except that I was pleasantly surprised to see this resurface, in an unexpected sort of way.

-justcloudy

I think it could be that because you already understood the poem it was clearer done this way.

Lol I agree the music is pretty repetitive and uninspiring, I was going for an eighty's rock sound