No One Reads My Poems But Google

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Wow, you made up parataxis and hypotaxis? It's a valid enough technique. The poem is readable.

Just because I make something up doesn't mean it isn't true.

I can be more extreme. If I say, you and me, and I really don't like somebody, I might say, you; and me. But of course I would never really do that. If I didn't like somebody why would I say you and me about them? Though superstition has its place in grammatical sense.

I ADORE the title and wish I'd thought of it first, I'm so jealous.

You know I love you, and I'm a southern gal ...I like my men to be intelligent. Sex is good and all, but what do you talk about the next 23 hours of the day? I need a smart man.

Back to the poem...I think it is wonderful...shows the depression in a way that I can relate to. Been there, ,....ect.

love ya,
mel.

Then again, if it's a manic depression you can sometimes have sex on into those other 23 hours too. Especially in spring. Or you're at least out trying to find somebody to do it with.