02-02-2014, 10:10 AM
Hi Zainabk,
A simple question-- what are you trying to get across with this poem? It seems too random to have substance. Some lines are nice but they mean nothing without anything backing them up.
-justcloudy
A simple question-- what are you trying to get across with this poem? It seems too random to have substance. Some lines are nice but they mean nothing without anything backing them up.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.