02-02-2014, 04:25 AM
I like the harshness and intensity of this, the feeling of spiraling quickly out of control, the wisdom of hindsight and regret. The last line took me back a bit - I had anticipated that it would be more of a rueful forgiveness rather than condemnation of the self, or perhaps it means "we are lucky we did not die" as opposed to "we deserved to die".
As regards "covered with drywall vomit in the walk-in closet" - the meaning is clear, but to me it sounds like the vomit is made of drywall, hmmm.
Really think this is good, reverberates for all of us who have spent a few months away and awry. Linda
As regards "covered with drywall vomit in the walk-in closet" - the meaning is clear, but to me it sounds like the vomit is made of drywall, hmmm.
Really think this is good, reverberates for all of us who have spent a few months away and awry. Linda