02-02-2014, 02:51 AM
Hey Keith, I love this wild girlfriend of yours! She would be my downfall of course. Nice way to repurpose the title and some of themes from an earlier post. I dig your voice, but you need to turn up your mike and lower the guitar amp a bit. The only bump that I noticed was in stanza 3. The 'Taking turns' line was lagging behind the music and the 'grace' line had to be stretched a bit. However, it may have been just a timing issue. Cool man!/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris