short poem (edit)

short poem (edit)

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02-01-2014, 07:02 AM

(02-01-2014, 12:11 AM)fogglethorpe Wrote: It is usually best to avoid metaphors and other rhetorical devices in haiku and senryu. They should be snapshots.

Thanks for the advise, and I agree. I shouldn't call this senryu, it's more like a short poem.
Best,
-LB

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short poem (edit) - by Volaticus - 01-05-2014, 11:34 AM

RE: senryu(?) - by billy - 01-05-2014, 12:34 PM

RE: senryu(?) - by Volaticus - 01-05-2014, 12:46 PM

RE: senryu - by billy - 01-05-2014, 06:51 PM

RE: senryu - by Swoonjet - 02-01-2014, 03:28 PM

RE: senryu - by Volaticus - 02-05-2014, 10:20 AM

RE: senryu - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 03:51 PM

RE: senryu - by bena - 02-04-2014, 06:20 AM

RE: senryu - by ChristopherSea - 02-05-2014, 04:13 AM

RE: senryu - by Erthona - 02-05-2014, 04:33 AM

RE: senryu - by ChristopherSea - 02-06-2014, 05:14 AM

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