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The World and All Its Light

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02-01-2014, 03:52 AM

Thank you for your kind and honest feedback, fogglethorpe Smile

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I like your useful trimming of a few things in the poem.

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

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The World and All Its Light - by heslopian - 01-29-2014, 09:42 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by billy - 01-29-2014, 10:11 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by heslopian - 01-29-2014, 07:24 PM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by Erthona - 01-30-2014, 12:13 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by billy - 02-01-2014, 09:49 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by heslopian - 01-30-2014, 12:33 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by heslopian - 02-01-2014, 03:52 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by Erthona - 02-01-2014, 10:14 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by tectak - 02-05-2014, 03:46 AM

RE: The World and All Its Light - by heslopian - 02-05-2014, 07:43 AM

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