Cycle
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I really like the imagery here. The contrasting themes work well. Light and Dark. Color and Shadow. Some really great word choices too. Took me a bit to find a good rhythm but I think I found it and it works. When I read this, I see flying saucers and mythical creatures set against a seemingly empty pre-dawn urban wilderness.
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Cycle - by Zainabk - 01-29-2014, 11:41 AM
RE: Cycle - by Insideaus - 01-29-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: Cycle - by Swoonjet - 02-01-2014, 03:20 AM
RE: Cycle - by Humbert - 02-02-2014, 10:00 AM
RE: Cycle - by justcloudy - 02-02-2014, 10:10 AM
RE: Cycle - by Zainabk - 02-04-2014, 09:12 AM
RE: Cycle - by justcloudy - 02-04-2014, 08:50 PM
RE: Cycle - by ChristopherSea - 02-04-2014, 09:33 PM



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