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I Wrote My Suicide Note
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01-30-2014, 01:53 PM
Straight to the point. I think it's deep and creatively addresses a societal issue however, the length does bother me due to the fact that the brief contact in my opinion gives the poem a feel of non-importance.
I think it is a great start but maybe a stanza or 2 in the center can better ft the moot feeling of the poem. |
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I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Todd - 10-16-2013, 07:27 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by billy - 10-16-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Keith - 10-16-2013, 09:41 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by ChristopherSea - 10-16-2013, 07:48 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by ellajam - 10-17-2013, 01:44 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by bena - 10-17-2013, 02:18 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by milo - 10-17-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by tigrflye - 10-17-2013, 06:15 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Todd - 10-20-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by sansysans - 10-21-2013, 03:48 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Wjames - 10-22-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Todd - 10-27-2013, 05:05 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Charlesjoseph - 11-05-2013, 09:53 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Todd - 11-06-2013, 02:43 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by laurenroberta - 01-18-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by clemonz - 01-20-2014, 04:17 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Brownlie - 01-21-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by newsclippings - 01-21-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Thoth the Atlantean - 02-01-2014, 09:18 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Insideaus - 01-21-2014, 03:06 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by 5th Flow Boy - 01-30-2014, 01:53 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by 71degrees - 01-31-2014, 01:23 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Todd - 01-31-2014, 05:05 AM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by gslegrá - 01-31-2014, 10:35 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Swoonjet - 02-01-2014, 03:48 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Thoth the Atlantean - 02-01-2014, 05:38 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by Humbert - 02-02-2014, 12:33 PM
RE: I Wrote My Suicide Note - by LickinLyrics - 02-02-2014, 07:31 PM
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