Heroic Crown of Sonnets (Another Activity)

[Truerenigma]

Hi mercedes. Did you know that your last line needs to rhyme with hall? or were you going for a slant rhyme here?

So this is how we enter: clockworks tick,
they tock; they tell your story in the hall.
The childhood strengths that guide you brick by brick,
they’re waiting here to haunt you, when you’re old.

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I see that you rhymed your second line with the needed rhyme for the last line. You may have gotten it mixed up. (it is confusing)

We are collaborating on a final sonnet, which will be made up of the first line of each our fourteen other sonnets. Your last line will be the fist line of the next sonnet, which means it is going to be the next line in the ultimate sonnet.

So far we've got:

So this is how we enter: clockworks tick (a)
they tock; they tell your story in the hall. (b)
The childhood strengths that guide you brick by brick (a)



Nice sonnet btw. And thanks for playing.