Altoona (1977)

Altoona (1977)

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01-30-2014, 02:53 AM

Thanks for the read. Your first two thoughts tell me I'm on the right track. Aside from "tense shift" (which is correct) can you offer any suggestion as to how to get from "now" (first five words) to "then" (rest of poem)?

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Altoona (1977) - by 71degrees - 01-29-2014, 04:52 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by heslopian - 01-29-2014, 09:01 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by 71degrees - 01-30-2014, 02:53 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by ellajam - 01-30-2014, 03:12 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by 71degrees - 01-31-2014, 01:24 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by tomoffing - 01-30-2014, 07:45 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by billy - 01-30-2014, 08:01 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by Swoonjet - 02-01-2014, 04:56 AM

RE: Altoona (1977) - by 71degrees - 02-01-2014, 08:06 AM

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