Heroic Crown of Sonnets (Another Activity)

[Truerenigma]

billy, did you forget that your last line will be the third line of the final sonnet?

So this is how we enter: clockworks tick,
they tock; they tell your story in the hall.
The childhood strengths by which he's truly bound. . .

Might be able to get creative with the punctuation to make it work, but it doesn't rhyme. I like your sonnet though, and thanks for joining in. Shouldn't be too hard to adjust your couplet.

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Also, billy, after you get it worked out could you please paste the first three lines of the final sonnet above your post, and include your punctuation, so that the rest of us can see your vision for it? (It doesn't have to be punctuated the same way that I did it above.)

If you need help brainstorming, suggestions, or anything else, just let me know. I'll be around. . .

Thanks again.