01-30-2014, 12:33 AM
Thank you for your kind and helpful critique, Erthona
I see what you mean about sit/sat... It's hard to get the tense right. I think I put "sit" because I was going for the present tense; a fantasy being imagined as the narrator speaks.
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I see what you mean about sit/sat... It's hard to get the tense right. I think I put "sit" because I was going for the present tense; a fantasy being imagined as the narrator speaks.(01-30-2014, 12:13 AM)Erthona Wrote: I had written something of more substance but Billy's program had whisked it away. I have never heard of Battenburg (Billy) no seen "black grass" (except for in the oil fields). Anyway, nice dichotomy. Must go now.This is Battenburg cake, a popular teatime treat in England
Dale
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