01-30-2014, 12:13 AM
Jack,
Outside of "revealed the brittle grass, now black with age." which I have never seen, you have crated an excellent dichotomy that could apply to so many things, such as the split between the eventually staleness of the English Romantic period and the freshness of the modernest period.
I'm also thinking after another read that it should be "but just to sat," instead of "but just to sit,". That might be complete;y wrong, but I'm not pulling out the grammar book to find out, besides just sat feels correct.
PS to Bilbo "cracked Battenburg paving slabs" common where? I have never heard of them!
Dale
Jack,
I had written something of more substance but Billy's program had whisked it away. I have never heard of Battenburg (Billy) no seen "black grass" (except for in the oil fields). Anyway, nice dichotomy. Must go now.
Dale
Outside of "revealed the brittle grass, now black with age." which I have never seen, you have crated an excellent dichotomy that could apply to so many things, such as the split between the eventually staleness of the English Romantic period and the freshness of the modernest period.
I'm also thinking after another read that it should be "but just to sat," instead of "but just to sit,". That might be complete;y wrong, but I'm not pulling out the grammar book to find out, besides just sat feels correct.
PS to Bilbo "cracked Battenburg paving slabs" common where? I have never heard of them!
Dale
Jack,
I had written something of more substance but Billy's program had whisked it away. I have never heard of Battenburg (Billy) no seen "black grass" (except for in the oil fields). Anyway, nice dichotomy. Must go now.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.