01-29-2014, 11:51 PM
No you're right I assumed to much. If you grew up where I did and knew a little about jazz and here I mean Basso Nova and Getz history, you probably would have gotten it, but that is all pretty specialized knowledge, especially the TexMex scene which would need to be lived, not read. Reading back over I think the only point of contention is the "up the pulsing beat to the stars," and the "beat" comes from the bass line, but it is implied, so I guess I need to make it more clearly.
Thanks for the critique, I didn't mean to be so pissy.
Dale
Thanks for the critique, I didn't mean to be so pissy.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.